Home work(Aug 14)
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Writing Exercise:
Should movies be rated? Why? Explain your answer.
Answer:
of course, movies have to be rated. Each movie has messages the director want to convey. However, it takes a different way each other. That ways can be violent, gorgeous, etc.
So, directors have to choose audiences who can accept the messages. If he don't, audiences would be whirl.
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of course, movies have to be rated.
>> Of course, movies have to be rated.
Each movie has messages the director want to convey.
>> Each movie has a message the director wants to convey.
However, it takes a different way each other.
>> However, they are both different.
That ways can be violent, gorgeous, etc.
>> They can be violent, gorgeous, etc.
So, directors have to choose audiences who can accept the messages.
>> CORRECT
If he don\'t, audiences would be whirl.
>> If he don\'t, audiences would whirl.
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