Home work(Aug 16)
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise:
Do you sometimes buy things that you don’t need? Why? Explain your answer.
Answer:
Yes. There are times when I buy things that I do not care about.
Well, I don't know why am I doing it.
When I see beautiful clothes, latest electronics, etc, just I want to buy that. Despite no need it to me. Sorry I don't know why.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jun!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
Have a wonderful weekend!
See you on Monday! ☺
Yes.
>> Yes, I do.
There are times when I buy things that I do not care about.
>> CORRECT
Well, I don\'t know why am I doing it.
>> Well, I don\'t know why I\'m doing it.
When I see beautiful clothes, latest electronics, etc, just I want to buy that.
>> When I see beautiful clothes, latest electronics, etc., I just can\'t help but buy them.
Despite no need it to me.
>> I still buy them despite of their superfluousness.
Sorry I don\'t know why.
>> Sorry, I don\'t know why.
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