Home work(Aug 20)
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise:
Does your country need stricter laws to punish noisy neighbors or discos, which play loud music late at night? Explain your answer.
Answer:
There are many noise problems in our country because of many apartments.
I heard that in news many times, downstairs person killed upstairs person.
So,in order to prevent these things, our country have to take measures.
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There are many noise problems in our country because of many apartments.
>> CORRECT
I heard that in news many times, downstairs person killed upstairs person.
>> Like, the neighbor downstairs killed his neighbor upstairs and I\'ve seen it in the news.
So,in order to prevent these things, our country have to take measures.
>> So, in order to prevent these things, our country has to take stronger measures.
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