Home work(Aug 22)
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise:
Is it OK to discriminate against gay people? Why or why not? Explain your answer.
Answer:
I don't want to discriminate against gay people. But I don't like them and
It is true that I feel bad when I look at them.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jun!
Thank you so much for doing your homework ^^
Stay dry!
See you tomorrow ☺
I don\'t want to discriminate against gay people.
>> CORRECT
But I don\'t like them and
It is true that I feel bad when I look at them.
>> However, I don\'t really like the and the truth is I feel bad when I look at them.
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