Home work(Aug 23)
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Exercise:
How important is the religious aspect of marriage to you? Why or why not? Explain your answer.
Answer:
The religious aspect of marriage is not important to me. To some extent.
I'm not a man of religion, even though my mother is a christian.
So, I do not care what religion is, except for the pseudo religion and the religion not in Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jun!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
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The religious aspect of marriage is not important to me.
>> CORRECT
To some extent.
>> CORRECT
I\'m not a man of religion, even though my mother is a christian.
>> I\'m not a man of religion, even though my mother is a Christian.
So, I do not care what religion is, except for the pseudo religion and the religion not in Korea.
>> So, I do not care what religion is, except for the pseudo religion and the religion not practiced in Korea.
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