Home work(Aug 9)

2018-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rosie

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Home work: What are some things you can do without spending a cent? Explain your answer. answer: well, I think that it is hard to do something in a materialistic society. But, on second thoughts, there is nothing i can't do. I was born without anything. but I've achieved many things actually. So we can do anything without spending a cent. We can make money and fall in love with someone without spending a cent. It's my opinion. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jun!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^

Have a great evening! ☺

well, I think that it is hard to do something in a materialistic society.
>> Well, I think that it is hard to do something in a materialistic society.

But, on second thoughts, there is nothing i can\'t do.
>> On a second thought, there is nothing I can do.

I was born without anything. but I\'ve achieved many things actually.
>> I was born without anything but I have actually achieved many things.

So we can do anything without spending a cent.
>> So, we can do anything without spending a cent.

We can make money and fall in love with someone without spending a cent.
>> CORRECT

It\'s my opinion. :)

>> CORRECT

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