home work 'can a good teacher influence how well you enjoy learning a language?'
학생이 쓴 원문
If I was a language teacher, I would say that there is some way to improve your
impression skills. First of all, you need to recite some sentences that is
useful to your daily life. Should you try to read it repeatedly, I think you
must have be use to saying foreign language. Another thing you have to do is
that you always try to find it's meaning in the dictionary when you didn't
understand what it means exactly. lastly, Always speaking loudly, It is
necessary for you to enhance your ability better.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Richie!
\"Knowledge is power.\" Thank you very much for sending over your homework. I enjoyed reading your sentences! I appreciate the eagerness your showing in enhancing your communicatiuon skills. Kindly review your mistakes for your improvement. Always remember that I am always here to help you. I would be more than very willing to help you out. See you later! Take care.
~T. Kate^^
Here are my corrections for you:
If I was a language teacher, I would say that there is some way to improve your impression skills.
>> If I were a language teacher, I would say that there are some ways to improve communication skills.
First of all, you need to recite some sentences that is useful to your daily life.
>> Correct (Nice Sentence)
>> First of all, you need to recite some sentences that are useful in your daily life.
Should you try to read it repeatedly, I think you must have be use to saying foreign language.
>> Should you try to read it repeatedly, I think you must have to get used in speaking foreign language. (Better)
Another thing you have to do is that you always try to find its meaning in the dictionary when you didn\'t understand what it means exactly.
>> Correct
>> Another thing you have to do is to try to find its meaning in the dictionary when you didn\'t understand exactly what it means.
lastly, Always speaking loudly, It is necessary for you to enhance your ability better.
>> Lastly, I always speak loudly, it is necessary for you to enhance your ability better. (Good Job!)
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