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2012-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Home work 1. ugly - uglier - ugliest 2. keen - keener - keenest 3. happy - happier - happiest 4. tall - taller - tallest 5. good - better - best I went to the library near my house after work yesterday. I borrowed some books. I took 3 books from the library. One of them, it's a book about the ski. I'm going to go to ski next Monday. I'm first. I don't know how to ski. So I need the information about it. But I didn't read it. Because I got a call from my friend Hellena. We talked for 2 hours. I couldn't open the book. I was very tired. I have many things to do. but I haven't enough time.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], Job well done for your composition! I\'m also hoping that you will enjoy having Ski with your friends on Monday.. Talk to you again later Miss. [Name],..:) T.Cam Home work1. ugly - uglier - ugliest >>correct!2. keen - keener - keenest >>correct!3. happy - happier - happiest >>correct!4. tall - taller - tallest >>correct!5. good - better - best>>correct!I went to the library near my house after work yesterday. >.correct!I borrowed some books. >>correct!I took 3 books from the library. >>correct!One of them, it\'s a book about the ski. >>correct! >>One of them is a book about Ski.I\'m going to go to ski next Monday. >>correct! (informal) >>I\'m going to ski next Monday.I\'m first. >>I will be the first in line.I don\'t know how to ski. So I need the information about it.>>correct! But I didn\'t read it. Because I got a call from my friend Hellena. >>correct!We talked for 2 hours. I couldn\'t open the book. I was very tired. >>correct!I have many things to do. but I haven\'t enough time. >>I have many things to do but I don\'t have anough time.  

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