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2012-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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1. encounter when I first encounter my girlfriend, I thought her's very cute. 2. conduct He is answerable (to me) for his conduct 3. prevent when i wake up, i know my condition too bad. so i prevent for cold, i ate a medicine. 4. interfere Mother ! Don't interfere in my driving. please.. 5. prescribe prescribe -------------------------------------------------------------------- i made a korean traditional food during holiday with my family. for During made a food, we talk about a lot of topic. we have a very happy time. also, interduce my girl to parents. My parents were very welcoming her. we have dinner and drank tea.For a day, but I was very happy because spend time with family and girlfriend. It was not a very special day but was a happy day to be with family How did you send a holiday?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a great job!  You just forgot to answer number 5. ^^ I\'m happy to know that you enjoyed your holiday with your family and your girlfriend. As for me, I also spent my holiday with my family and enjoyed it. See you in class later. Take care!!   Here are my corrections:   1. encounterwhen I first encounter my girlfriend, I thought her\'s very cute. >> When I first encountered my girlfriend I thought she was very cute.2. conductHe is answerable (to me) for his conduct >> Correct!3. preventwhen i wake up, i know my condition too bad.so i prevent for cold, i ate a medicine. >> When I woke up I know that my condition is bad so I took a medicine to prevent myself in having colds.4. interfereMother ! Don\'t interfere in my driving. please.. >> Mother! Don\'t interfere with my driving, please..5. prescribeprescribe >> My doctor prescribed a medicine for my colds.--------------------------------------------------------------------i made a korean traditional food during holiday with my family. >> I made a Korean traditional food during the holiday with my family. for During made a food, we talk about a lot of topic. >> While making the food, we talked about a lot of topic.   we have a very happy time. >> We had a very happy time.also, interduce my girl to parents. >> I also introduced my girlfriends to my parents.   My parents were very welcoming her. >> My parents welcomed her. we have dinner and drank tea. >> We had dinner and had some tea.   For a day, but I was very happy because spend time with family and girlfriend. >> It was just a day but I was very happy because I spent it with my family and my girlfriend.It was not a very special day but was a happy day to be with family >> It was not a very special day but I it was a happy day to be with the family.How did you send a holiday? >> How did you spent your holiday?

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