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The reason why I study English is that to apply in an Australia university. If I go there, I have to get good communication skill. Another reason is that the person who will meet in future may not speak Korean. The discussion related to my subjects will be talk in English. For effective debate, I’d better talk English fluently. For example, When I went to Hokkaido University in Japan, I talked to professors and students in English. Because I can’t speak Japanese, we used to English to communicate. So I’ll keep talking with Beth teacher on phone.
강사 첨삭
Hello Luna! Thank you for this. Yes, if you want to expand your horizon, speaking fluently in English is necessary. English is indeed the international language. See you in class!
- T. Beth
The reason why I study English is that to apply in an Australia university. >> The reason I study English is to apply in an Australian university.
If I go there, I have to get good communication skill.
>> Correct
Another reason is that the person who will meet in future may not speak Korean.
>> Another reason is that the person whom I will meet in future may not speak Korean.
The discussion related to my subjects will be talk in English.
>> The discussions related to my subjects will be in English.
For effective debate, I’d better talk English fluently.
>> For an effective debate, I’d better talk in English fluently.
For example, When I went to Hokkaido University in Japan, I talked to professors and students in English.
>> Correct (For example, when I went to Hokkaido University in Japan, I talked to professors and students in English.
Because I can’t speak Japanese, we used to English to communicate.
>> Because I can’t speak Japanese, we used English to communicate.
>> OR: Because I can’t speak Japanese, we communicated in English.
So I’ll keep talking with Beth teacher on phone.
>> So, I’ll keep talking with teacher Beth on the phone.
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