Home work(Essay)

Hello Jennifer! Thank you for the effort. I appreciate you sending this in. I hope it will be better this next try. Never give up on it. If it is something you really want and it matters that much to you, keep trying. I will assist and help you in the best way I can. It is something you and I should work on. Let\'s do this!

- T .Beth

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I have to speak fluently English.

>>> I have to speak English fluently.    

There are two reasons why.

>>>  CORRECT.   

First of all, I am going to go to graduate school in USA.

>>>  CORRECT.

>>> OR: First of all, I\'m going to attend a graduate school in the US.    

It require for study in the USA.

>>> It is required for studying in the USA.    

If i can not fluently speak English i cna not understand in my class and i can not achieve good grade in the class so that is why i have to study English more than now.

>>> If I cannot fluently speak English, I wouldn\'t understand  the lectures in class then I wouldn\'t achieve good grades. That is why I have to study English more than now.    

I have been studying English for two years.

>>> CORRECT.     

And second of all, i have to pass some exam for enter the school but i already took the test twice.

>>>  And second of all, I have to pass some exams for entering the school but I already took the test twice.

>>> OR: In addition, I am required to pass some exams to enter the university but I already took the test twice.

I could not got the good score in the test.

>>>  I wasn\'t able to take a good score in those tests.   

So i have to effort for getting the good score.
>>>  Therefore, I have to exert more effort to get a good score.   

For these reasens why i have to speak fluently English.

>>> For these reasons, I have to speak English fluently.

>>> OR: These are the reasons why I have to speak English fluently.