Home work:People have many goals in life. What are some goals you have already accomplished?

2017-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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It is hard to me to answer , the reason why my goal in life is simple "accept my situation" and "enjoy my life", I think almost got a goal but sometimes I confuse that accomplished or not. Accept my situation: That's right sometimes I can't find out any exit in bad situation, I think accept situation and thinking positive are better during that time. Because of I should give up if I feel depress during that situation , but I accept that situation and positive thinking are can find our exit way more easily Enjoy my life : e.g. We can enjoy own life even din't have enough money, to do that we should to learn know how thanks to small thing. I think have a self-esteem is one of import thing but I tend to easily depressed when I got a heavy stress. Therefore sometimes I feel confused I got a goals accomplished or not

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

Setting goals gives me a long-term and short-term motivation. It also gives me the confidence I need to achieve higher and more complicated goals. By setting goals and constantly reminding myself of them, I feel as though I work harder to achieve my goals. In order to succeed I believe setting goals is very important. I have set many goals for myself, some of them I have accomplished but many of them I am still working on.

~~T. Andrea

It is hard to me to answer , the reason why my goal in life is simple \"accept my situation\" and \"enjoy my life\", I think almost got a goal but sometimes I confuse that accomplished or not.

>> It is hard for to answer the question because my goals in life are simple, \"accept my situation\" and \"enjoy my life\". I think I was able to accomplish my goals but there are times that I am still confuse if I really accomplished them or not.

Accept my situation:

>> Accept my situation.
That\'s right sometimes I can\'t find out any exit in bad situation, I think accept situation and thinking positive are better during that time.

>> That\'s right, sometimes I can\'t find the way to escape from a bad situation, I think I just have to accept the situation and to think positive.

Because of I should give up if I feel depress during that situation , but I accept that situation and positive thinking are can find our exit way more easily
>> I need to accept and think of positive things if I feel like giving up during that difficult situation. I can find my way out easily.
Enjoy my life :

>> Enjoy my life.
e.g. We can enjoy our life even din\'t have enough money, to do that we should to learn know how thanks to small thing.
>> We can enjoy our life even though we don\'t have enough money. We should learn how to be grateful with the small things we have.

I think have a self-esteem is one of import thing but I tend to easily depressed when I got a heavy stress.

>> I think having a self-esteem is very important but I tend to get depressed easily when I\'m stressed.
Therefore sometimes I feel confused I got a goals accomplished or not

>> That\'s why sometimes, I am still not sure if I really accomplished my goals or not.

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