home work today
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The bus stopped and the man got off.
2. We stayed at home or ate there.
3. I wanted to buy a newspaper but didn't have enough money.
4. He's so nice but he doesn't have enough money.
5. Do you want tea or coffee?
Hi, Jane^^ You know, I put off the last class because I had to attend to my best friend's wedding. I received the lovely bouquet! I felt little envious of her. In Korea, the friend who received the bouquet, have to marry in 6 months or she will get married over 3years later. Is it same in America? Oh, I'm little feared of being married over 3years later! haha~
Any way, See you after 3hours~ take care^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kate!
Thank you for your composition today! Wow! I love attending weddings! I enjoy watching couples exchanging their vows of love. It\'s so romantic! About receiving the bouquet, yes, we have similar belief. We believe that the person who catches the bouquet thrown by the bride will be the next woman who will get married. However, it doesn\'t necessarily mean that she\'ll get married in six months. Anyway, in your case I believe it\'s okay because you really have plans of getting married with your boyfriend in the near future. So just be happy. Take care and I\'ll see you in class later.\\
T. JanE ^^
1. The bus stopped and the man got off.
>> Correct 2. We stayed at home or ate there.>> The correct answer is and.3. I wanted to buy a newspaper but didn\'t have enough money.>> Correct 4. He\'s so nice but he doesn\'t have enough money.>> Correct 5. Do you want tea or coffee?>> Correct Hi, Jane^^
>> Correct You know, I put off the last class because I had to attend to my best friend\'s wedding.
>> You know, I put the class off because I had to attend my best friend\'s wedding.I received the lovely bouquet!
>> Correct I felt little envious of her.
>> I felt a little envious of her.In Korea, the friend who received the bouquet, have to marry in 6 months or she will get married over 3years later.
>> In Korea, the friend of the bride who receives the bouquet has to get married in 6 months, otherwise she will get married after 3 years.Is it same in America?
>> Is it the same in America?Oh, I\'m little feared of being married over 3years later! haha~>> Oh, I fear of being married after 3 years!Anyway, see you after 3hours~
>> Correct Take care^^
>> Correct
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