Homeless people
학생이 쓴 원문
To be honest, I feel compassion, sorry, pitiful and gloomy when I see people who live on the street.
I also think why they can only live like that and how I help them do work things with their house.
Nevertheless, I think they are also responsible for the reasons that they don\'t have a home.
Of course, responsibility will be with all of us, including the government
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This is a good topic for us to discuss.
I look forward to hearing your thoughts.
I\'ll see you soon!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
To be honest, I feel compassion, sorry, pitiful and gloomy when I see people who live on the street.
>> To be honest, I feel compassion and pity for them and I also feel sorry and gloomy when I see people who live on the street.
I also think why they can only live like that and how I help them do work things with their house.
I also think why they can only live like that and how I help them do work things with their house.
>> I also wonder why they can only live like that and how I can help them work on their houses.
Nevertheless, I think they are also responsible for the reasons that they don\'t have a home.
Nevertheless, I think they are also responsible for the reasons that they don\'t have a home.
>> Correct
Of course, responsibility will be with all of us, including the government
Of course, responsibility will be with all of us, including the government
>> Of course, the responsibility lies with all of us, including the government.
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