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2015-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi Jessie. Oh, you think that a Monday is blue to you, isn't it? But I don't think that it is gloomy because, as you know, it's the vacation. However there's no much time left for this happy time. I can't really believe that time is flowing fast. And talking of the story that you mentioned, it's not a story which you made, isn't it? kkk What a interesting story. <Essay> If I have enough money, I want to buy a sport car, but not that expensive one. It will release my stress like my habit. So I'll ride it when I have a free time, but not often. Because it's going to cost lots of fuels.

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Hi [이름]! I hope you can buy your very own sports car in the future. Let\'s hope for that. ^_^ The story wasn\'t mine. I actually placed the name of the writer after it. It\'s by BH Lee. I actually got it from a website. Anyway, let\'s continue talking tomorrow. See you! ~T. Jessie~ Hi Jessie. >> Correct!Oh, you think that a Monday is blue to you, isn\'t it? >> Oh, you think that a Monday is blue, isn\'t it? But I don\'t think that it is gloomy because, as you know, it\'s the vacation. >> Correct! However there\'s no much time left for this happy time. >> Correct! I can\'t really believe that time is flowing fast. >> Correct!And talking of the story that you mentioned, it\'s not a story which you made, isn\'t it? kkk >> And speaking of the story that you mentioned, it\'s not a story which you made, isn\'t it? kkk What a interesting story.>> What an interesting story.<Essay> If I have enough money, I want to buy a sport car, but not that expensive one. >> If I have enough money, I want to buy a sports car, but not the expensive one. It will release my stress like my habit. >> Correct! OR>> It will hep relieve my stress just like my habit. So I\'ll ride it when I have a free time, but not often. >> So I\'ll ride it when I have free time, but not often. Because it\'s going to cost lots of fuels. >> Correct!  

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