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Could it be remarkable days after the vacation is over? How is it a good thing if it's not February now? But I can't return back to the past. Hah... I want to enjoy these peaceful days more.
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Most people should give up their sleep. A baby often wake up in day time or night whenever. So both husband and wife should change a role to take care of a baby and to sleep a little more.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Well, it could be. But it depends on how you see it. ^_^ Hehehe
Like you\'ve said, sleep is something that parents should give up.
I think both of us are not yet ready to give that up. Hahaha
We better enjoy sleeping while we\'re still not married. ^_^
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there!
>> Correct!Could it be remarkable days after the vacation is over?
>> Could it be remarkable days when vacation is over?
OR>> Could it be remarkable days after the vacation?
OR>> Could I have remarkable days after the vacation?
How is it a good thing if it\'s not February now?
>> I think you mean: How is it a good thing if it\'s February now?
But I can\'t return back to the past. Hah...
>> But I can\'t return the past. Hah...
OR>> But I can\'t go back to the past.
I want to enjoy these peaceful days more.>> Correct!<Essay>Most people should give up their sleep. >> Correct!
A baby often wake up in day time or night whenever.
>> A baby often wakes up anytime.
So both husband and wife should change a role to take care of a baby and to sleep a little more.
>> So both husband and wife should take turns to take care of their baby and to sleep a little more.
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