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2015-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello there! Could it be remarkable days after the vacation is over? How is it a good thing if it's not February now? But I can't return back to the past. Hah... I want to enjoy these peaceful days more. <Essay> Most people should give up their sleep. A baby often wake up in day time or night whenever. So both husband and wife should change a role to take care of a baby and to sleep a little more.

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Good morning! Well, it could be. But it depends on how you see it. ^_^ Hehehe Like you\'ve said, sleep is something that parents should give up. I think both of us are not yet ready to give that up. Hahaha We better enjoy sleeping while we\'re still not married. ^_^ See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ Hello there! >> Correct!Could it be remarkable days after the vacation is over? >>  Could it be remarkable days when vacation is over? OR>> Could it be remarkable days after the vacation? OR>> Could I have remarkable days after the vacation? How is it a good thing if it\'s not February now? >> I think you mean: How is it a good thing if it\'s February now? But I can\'t return back to the past. Hah... >> But I can\'t return the past. Hah... OR>> But I can\'t go back to the past. I want to enjoy these peaceful days more.>> Correct!<Essay>Most people should give up their sleep. >> Correct! A baby often wake up in day time or night whenever. >> A baby often wakes up anytime. So both husband and wife should change a role to take care of a baby and to sleep a little more. >> So both husband and wife should take turns to take care of their baby and to sleep a little more.

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