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Eating with other people really makes food more delicious!
However, drinking coffee is very important, we must savor it alone! Ha! Ha!
I prefer eating with other people to eating alone.
>>CORRECT!
There are some reasons that I think.
>>I prefer eating with other people to eating alone due to following reasons.
First, when I eat some food alone, even though it is very something delicious, I often feel that it\'s not delicious.
>>CORRECT!
Second, while I eat something, I love to talk with other people becuase time flies fast.
>> Second, while I eat something, I love to talk with other people because time flies fast.
Third, I am usually be alone becuase my sons went to the baby school and my freinds live in other area.
>> Third, I am usually alone because my sons go to the baby school and my friends live in other area.
So, I miss eating with other people.
>>CORRECT!
However, sometimes I prefer to drink coffee without any disturbance.
>>CORRECT!
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