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-What do you think are the main causes of conflicts between people?- (^-^)
There are many causes of conficts between people.
I think that conflicts between people are natural things.
For example, If I meet someone, We must have a different home background, different thoughts and different values.
Therefore, Conflicts must happen when I meet others.
When I got married and had to live with my husband, I felt he was so different what I thought before I got married.
We argued and sometimes, ignored each other.
Now I am thinking that the causes of conflicts with him was lack of understaning for each other.
When I try to understand others, there will not exist conflicts in my relationships.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework! I appreciate the effort! ^ ^
I totally agree with you. Respect is the key. Be more understanding, because we all have our differences. And besides, you can never resolve a conflict if both parties are reactive. You know what they say; \"learn to respond and not to react!\" ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
There are many causes of conficts between people.
>>CORRECT (\"conflict\")
I think that conflicts between people are natural things.
I think that conflicts between people are natural things.
>>I think that conflicts between people is a natural thing.
For example, If I meet someone, We must have a different home background, different thoughts and different values.
For example, If I meet someone, We must have a different home background, different thoughts and different values.
>>CORRECT
Therefore, Conflicts must happen when I meet others.
Therefore, Conflicts must happen when I meet others.
>>Therefore, conflict arises because of individual differences.
When I got married and had to live with my husband, I felt he was so different what I thought before I got married.
When I got married and had to live with my husband, I felt he was so different what I thought before I got married.
>>When I got married and had to live with my husband, I felt he was so different with what I thought he was before getting married.
We argued and sometimes, ignored each other.
We argued and sometimes, ignored each other.
>>CORRECT
Now I am thinking that the causes of conflicts with him was lack of understaning for each other.
Now I am thinking that the causes of conflicts with him was lack of understaning for each other.
>>Now I think that the cause of our conflict is lack of understanding.
When I try to understand others, there will not exist conflicts in my relationships.
When I try to understand others, there will not exist conflicts in my relationships.
>>When we try to understand others, I think there will be less or no conflict at all.
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