Homer
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Do you see yourself being a vegetarian in the future? Why or why not?
Unless someone has a very rare disease that getting sick if eat meat, having only vegetable ingredients, I can\'t imagine in my point of view.
I never expect that I would be a vegetarian in the future. Because I enjoy many kinds of food which are made with meat. For me, meat is the ingredient that I can\'t eat because there isn\'t. In addition, having meat with the proper amount is very helpful to health.
I just hope that I could enjoy more and more dishes in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hi Homer! People become vegetarians for many reasons, including health, religious convictions, concerns about animal welfare or the use of antibiotics and hormones in livestock, or a desire to eat in a way that avoids excessive use of environmental resources. Although there are some people who refuse like us hahaha. Thanks for sharing your opinion! :)
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Unless someone has a very rare disease that getting sick if eat meat, having only vegetable ingredients, I can\'t imagine in my point of view.
>> Unless I have a very rare disease wherein I get sick from eating meat then I don\'t see myself in the point of view.
I never expect that I would be a vegetarian in the future.
>>I never expect that I would be a vegetarian in the future because I enjoy many kinds of food which are made with meat.
Because I enjoy many kinds of food which are made with meat.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
For me, meat is the ingredient that I can\'t eat because there isn\'t.
>> For me, meat is the ingredient that I can\'t eat without.
In addition, having meat with the proper amount is very helpful to health.
>> In addition, eating meat with the proper amount is very helpful to our health.
I just hope that I could enjoy more and more dishes in the future.
>> CORRECT
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