Homer
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What\'s the best memory you have from your childhood?
In my childhood, I don\'t remember much about it. Though, in terms of what I can remember about it, is playing a video game. Now, I\'m not interested in playing video games at all, but at that time I played it for a whole day as long as my mother bring me home while I was playing. Sometimes I skipped going academy to play it. Since I enjoyed it a lot, I think it\'s my best memory in my childhood.
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Hi Homer! Wow, you really loved video games. Hahahaha! There are memories in our childhood that we would truly cherish for a life time. Those were the days when life wasn\'t as tuff as it is right now. We were so innocent and care free. Thanks for sharing yours :)
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In my childhood, I don\'t remember much about it.
>> I don\'t remember much about my childhood.
Though, in terms of what I can remember about it, is playing a video game.
>> Though, in terms of what I can remembering, I used to play a lot of video games.
Now, I\'m not interested in playing video games at all, but at that time I played it for a whole day as long as my mother bring me home while I was playing.
>> Now, I\'m not interested in playing video games at all. But at that time, I played it the entire day as long as my mother would ask me to go home while I was playing.
Sometimes I skipped going academy to play it.
>> Sometimes, I skip going to the academy just to play it.
Since I enjoyed it a lot, I think it\'s my best memory in my childhood.
>> Since I enjoyed it a lot, I think it\'s the best memory of my childhood.
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