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2013-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Good morning Jane! X-mas is on the next week! I want to be the first person to you saying "Merry X-mas and Happy birthday"! Let's start this week wishing for a wonderful X-mas! See you later! HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Find one mistake in each sentence and correct it. Write the new sentences. 1. I left the home when I was twenty. >> I left home when I was twenty. 2. I moved to abroad in 1998. >> I moved abroad in 1998. 3. I went university in Buenos Aires. >> I went to university in Buenos Aires. 4. I got marry to Sarah, a university student. >> I got marry Sarah, a university student 5. I moved into Berlin to study German. >> I moved to Berlin to study German.

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! Wow! You made my day! Thank you for your advanced greetings! I wish you a Merry Christmas as well! Take care and see you in class! T. JanE ^^ Good morning Jane!>> Correct X-mas is on the next week!>> It\'s Christmas next week! I want to be the first person to you saying \"Merry X-mas and Happy birthday\"! >> I want to be the first person who greets you \"Merry Christmas and happy Birthday!\" Let\'s start this week wishing for a wonderful X-mas!>> Correct See you later!>> Correct HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Find one mistake in each sentence and correct it. Write the new sentences.1. I left the home when I was twenty.>> I left home when I was twenty.>> Correct 2. I moved to abroad in 1998.>> I moved abroad in 1998.>> Correct 3. I went university in Buenos Aires.>> I went to university in Buenos Aires.>> Correct 4. I got marry to Sarah, a university student.>> I got marry Sarah, a university student>> I got married to Sarah, a university student.5. I moved into Berlin to study German.>> I moved to Berlin to study German. >> Correct

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