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학생이 쓴 원문
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I searched about Sniper.
And my favorite gun named TRG-21 is verygood performance.
I like sniper gun because it is quiet and deadly.
When I go totroops I 'll learn how to shoot sniper it is possible.
강사 첨삭
Good evening TOM!
Happy hump day!
You did a good job with your homework again.
I appreciate that you talked about your favorite Sniper.
I don\'t know why I am not interested in guns.
Maybe I\'m just scared. ^^ Thank you for always being cooperative in class.
I hope that you\'ll learn a lot of words this holiday.
I encourage you to use them in class.
Talk to you on Friday. Enjoy your holiday.
Teacher Nina
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I like sniper gun because it is quiet and deadly.
>> Correct! When I go totroops I \'ll learn how to shoot sniper it is possible.
>> When I will join a troop, I\'ll learn how to use a sniper if it\'s possible,
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