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2014-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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x the x the x x a an x x I searched about Sniper. And my favorite gun named TRG-21 is verygood performance. I like sniper gun because it is quiet and deadly. When I go totroops I 'll learn how to shoot sniper it is possible.

강사 첨삭

Good evening TOM! Happy hump day! You did a good job with your homework again. I appreciate that you talked about your favorite Sniper. I don\'t know why I am not interested in guns. Maybe I\'m just scared. ^^ Thank you for always being cooperative in class. I hope that you\'ll learn a lot of words this holiday. I encourage you to use them in class. Talk to you on Friday. Enjoy your holiday. Teacher Nina   x >> Correct! the >> Correct! x >> Correct! the >> Correct! x >> Correct! x >> Correct! a >> the an >> x x >> the x>> Correct! I searched about Sniper. >> Correct! And my favorite gun named TRG-21 is verygood performance. >> And my favorite gun is called TRG-21 and the performance is very good. I like sniper gun because it is quiet and deadly. >> Correct! When I go totroops I \'ll learn how to shoot sniper it is possible. >> When I will join a troop, I\'ll learn how to use a sniper if it\'s possible,

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