Homes and houses
학생이 쓴 원문
Home is where we live and house is just a building.
Home is very important to humans and animal because it's where we live.
Some houses are made of bricks,wood and sometimes mud in Africa.
In Korea homes are built in high apartment because Korea is a very little country but there are lots of people.England houses is usally double decked house.
It is made out of bricks.Instead of having heaters in the house they have radiator in their house
강사 첨삭
Hello!^_-
Happy Thursday!
You are right. We use the noun house to refer to a building. We use home in a more personal and emotional way to refer to where someone lives. The noun home does not usually refer to a building.
My house is made of wood and concrete blocks.
How I wish here in the Philippines we\'ll just have tall apartment buildings too instead of informal settling villages. Informal settlers\' houses are made of old woods, sacks and cartons so it\'s not that safe for them.
Thank you so much for this composition. I\'ve made some modifications for you to review.
See you in class.
~T. Mayleen~
Home is where we live and house is just a building.
>> Home is where a family dwells and house is the structure they live in.
Home is very important to humans and animal because it\'s where we live.
>> Home is very important to humans and animals because it\'s where they dwell and where their affection\'s centered.Some houses are made of bricks,wood and sometimes mud in Africa.
>> Some houses are made of bricks, some are made of wood. Some houses in Africa are made of mud.In Korea homes are built in high apartment because Korea is a very little country but there are lots of people.
>> In Korea, homes are located in tall apartment buildings. Korea is a small country yet there are a lot of people.
England houses is usally double decked house.
>> Houses in England are usually double deckers.It is made out of bricks.
>> They are made of bricks.
Instead of having heaters in the house they have radiator in their house
>> Instead of having heaters, they have radiators inside their houses.
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