homeschooling advantages
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Yes, I strongly agree with you.
More responsibilities at work means more income to employed parents.
However, time for their children will be lesser.
That is if they cannot balance time between family and work.
It has really a big impact to children.
~Teacher Chloe
However, bright sides being able to cover its downsides are obvious.
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Primarily, positive effects on personality development can be expected.
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It is well known that close family bond has a positive impact on children’s development.
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>>It is well known that strong family bond has a positive impact on children’s development.
Unfortunately, as the number of double-income families increases, relationship between parents and their children seems to be less close compared to the past.
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>>Unfortunately, as the number of double-income families increases, relationship between parents children seems to get weak compared to the past.
Teaching and learning at home might be an effective solution for this negative trend by increasing the time spent together.
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Moreover, personalized learning can be a proper alternative for the current education, which is excessively competitive.
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Children who learn what they want are happier than others in regular school estimated only by the result of formal test.
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