homeschooling disadvantages

2017-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Some may argue that homeschooling will not be able to replace the traditional education system due to its limits. Considering the fact that home education is usually conducted by a parent or tutor, generally not being competent to teach all subjects at once like in a school education, less effective transmission of knowledge and skills can be anticipated. If parents desire specialized education, additional expenditure would be required and this, in turn, imposes financial burden to them. In addition, poor social skills can be present because children learning at home have no classmates and only a few chances to hang out with their peer group, which play a decisive role in nurturing sociality. In fact, millions of studies have reported that children who do not have enough experiences playing with friends find a difficulty in making new friends when they are grown up compared to others have.

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Some may argue that homeschooling will not be able to replace the traditional education system due to its limits.

>>Correct!

Considering the fact that home education is usually conducted by a parent or tutor, generally not being competent to teach all subjects at once like in a school education, less effective transmission of knowledge and skills can be anticipated.

>>Correct!

If parents desire specialized education, additional expenditure would be required and this, in turn, imposes financial burden to them.

>>Correct!

In addition, poor social skills can be present because children learning at home have no classmates and only a few chances to hang out with their peer group, which play a decisive role in nurturing sociality.

>>Correct!

In fact, millions of studies have reported that children who do not have enough experiences playing with friends find a difficulty in making new friends when they are grown up compared to others have.  

>>Correct!

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