Homesickness
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How did you deal with homesickness when you were still working as a navigation officer?
A. Well, there were some public facilities in the vessel like a library, gym and karaoke.
Also i could study, read some books or watch some recorded television programs.
After my duty which is for 4hours, two times a day, I used that kinds of facilities.
And I have had beer a lot. Because the liqueor is tax free for the person who work out of Korea.It is special benefit who earn foregin currency.
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Hi, Kelly.
Thank you for doing your homework. There are some minor corrections but overall, you did great in expressing your ideas. Great job.
- T. Caitlyn
Well, there were some public facilities in the vessel like a library, gym and karaoke.
>> Well, there were some public facilities on the vessel like a library, gym, and karaoke.
Also i could study, read some books or watch some recorded television programs.
Also i could study, read some books or watch some recorded television programs.
>> Also, I could study, read some books or watch some recorded television programs.
After my duty which is for 4hours, two times a day, I used that kinds of facilities.
After my duty which is for 4hours, two times a day, I used that kinds of facilities.
>> After working for 4 hours twice a day, I use those facilities.
And I have had beer a lot. Because the liqueor is tax free for the person who work out of Korea.
And I have had beer a lot. Because the liqueor is tax free for the person who work out of Korea.
>> And I drink a lot of beer because liquors are tax-free for those working outside Korea.
It is special benefit who earn foregin currency.
>> It is a special benefit for those earning foreign currency.
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