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I think there are several places of interested in my hometown. One such place is Han-river which flows across Seoul City. When I lived in Seoul, I frequently went to Han-river to take a cruise and ride a bike.
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I think there are several places of interested in my hometown.
>> I think there are several places of interest in my hometown.
One such place is Han-river which flows across Seoul City.
>> One such place is Han-river, which flows across Seoul City.
When I lived in Seoul, I frequently went to Han-river to take a cruise and ride a bike.
>> correct
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