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I try to have healthy lifestyle.
I eat meal 3times a day.
And I have fresh vegetable and fruit.
I take synthesizing vitamin every morning.
And I try to do exercise at least 3 time a week.
And last, I always have a determination to loose coffee.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
I am happy to hear that you have a healthy lifestyle.
Keep it up!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
I try to have healthy lifestyle.
>> I try to have a healthy lifestyle.I eat meal 3times a day.
>> I eat three times a day.
>> OR: I have three meals in a day.And I have fresh vegetable and fruit.
>> I eat fresh vegetables and fruits.I take synthesizing vitamin every morning.
>> I take synthetic vitamins every morning.And I try to do exercise at least 3 time a week.
>> I exercise at least three times a week.And last, I always have a determination to loose coffee.
>> Lastly, I am determined to cut my caffaine intake.
>> OR: Lastly, I am determined to decrease my coffee intake.
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