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2016-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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I try to have healthy lifestyle. I eat meal 3times a day. And I have fresh vegetable and fruit. I take synthesizing vitamin every morning. And I try to do exercise at least 3 time a week. And last, I always have a determination to loose coffee.

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Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. ^^ I am happy to hear that you have a healthy lifestyle. Keep it up!   Teacher Sophia Here are your corrections: I try to have healthy lifestyle. >> I try to have a healthy lifestyle.I eat meal 3times a day. >> I eat three times a day. >> OR: I have three meals in a day.And I have fresh vegetable and fruit. >> I eat fresh vegetables and fruits.I take synthesizing vitamin every morning. >> I take synthetic vitamins every morning.And I try to do exercise at least 3 time a week. >> I exercise at least three times a week.And last, I always have a determination to loose coffee. >> Lastly, I am determined to cut my caffaine intake. >> OR: Lastly, I am determined to decrease my coffee intake.  

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