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Hi, Sylvia!^^
Thank you for giving out your opinions about our topic for today.

Regarding the content, your ideas are good enough to support your answer.

However, the grammar and spelling should be checked all the time

to make your composition more effective.

Keep practicing!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Some people believe that students aren’t learning enough in high school. Should school standards be higher? Explain your answer using specific reasons and examples.
 l think,high school standards should not be higher.

>> Correct
 korean education systems have any problmes, because many high school students think, that they need to get private educations after school.and they are not interesting in classes in school,and they are even dozing in classes.

>> Korean education system has problems because many high school students think that they need to get private education after school and they are not interested in classes that they are even dozing in classes.
 Every korean new administration tried to revise the education systems but there ware no appropriate measures.

>> Every Korean administration tried to revise the education system but there were no appropriate measures.
 Most of studies in high school are pocused on the college entrance exam.

>> Most students in high school are focused on college entrance exam.

so they trained to solve questions of exam without growing creativity.

>> They are trained to solve questions of an exam without growing creativity.
 I think, we need to change the fundamental structure of education systems,and we sould change our value systems about what to do after graduating from high school.

>> I think, we need to change the fundamental structure of the education and value system towards what to do after graduating from high school.