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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Sylvia!^^
You are very diligent and I want to
thank you for doing your homework again!^^
Just be careful with some sentence patterns.
I checked some of them so I hope you will also find time
in reviewing them.
~~Teacher Erine
Some people around me like to fish as a their hobby.
>> Correct
and they just enjoy it.
>> Correct
they don`t eat them.
>> Correct
they just let them go back in the water after they`ve caught them.
>> Correct
i don`t understand them.
>> Correct
and I don`t agree fishing for the sports.
>> And I don\'t agree with fishing as a sport.
think living animals can suffer pain.
>> Living animals can suffer.
It is truly sad and cruel.
>> Correct
It`s okay If we should eat fish for intake protain and other nutrients.
>> It\'s okay if we eat fish to intake protein and other nutrients.
but I don`t agree If they catch fish for their personal desires.
>> Correct
I also disagree fishing for sports.
>> I also disagree that fishing is a sport.
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