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In my opinion, the school don`t need excessive it`s employ security guards and have installed security equipment, if they don`t open all people.they must been used by students and their parents only. In the past,there are not enough spaces for people who want to enjoy exercises such as basketball soccer and football. so everyone have free access to the place .therefore t many accidents happend in the school against children. thesday there are many public spaces that we can use.

Thank you so much for doing your your homework again, Sylvia!^^ Your sentences were jumbled and I really have to check on them. Please have some time to review the sentences. If you have any question, feel free to ask me during the class. ~~Teacher Erine~~ In my opinion, the school don`t need excessive it`s employ security guards and have installed security equipment, if they don`t open all people. >> In my opinion, a school doesn`t need to employ excessive security guards and have security equipment installed, if they don`t open all people. they must been used by students and their parents only. >> Parents and students should only be there. In the past,there are not enough spaces for people who want to enjoy exercises such as basketball soccer and football. >> In the past, there were not enough spaces for people who want to enjoy exercising such as basketball soccer and football. so everyone have free access to the place . >> So everyone had free access to the place. therefore t many accidents happend in the school against children. >> Therefore, many accidents happend in the school against children.thesday there are many public spaces that we can use. >>These days, there are many public spaces that we can use.