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Hi, Sylvia.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts
about our topic for today.
Let\'s have more topics next time.
I will definitely see you soon.
Take care!
~~Teacher Erine~~
I think minority of students also should be respected.
>> I think minority of students should also be respected.
so school should provide low fat and vegetarian lunch for them we have been living in uniform community.
>> So school should provide a low fat and vegetarian lunch for them. We have been living in a uniform community.
we have to lead all students as a healthy and creative person.
>> Correct
and make them a person who give consider for others.
>> and make them a person who give consideration to others.
we need to be gradually changed.
>> Correct
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