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Happy Firday, Sylvia!^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts
about going to the space.
If you ask me my opinion, I will just want to be
with a handsome and intelligent guy. kkk
See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~
If i go traveling to the space, i will choose a scientist among them.
>> If I go traveling to the space, I will choose a scientist among them.
Because he has a lot of knowledge about the space and spaceship.
>> Correct
first of all my biggest concern is whther we can go back to the earth.
>> First of all. my biggest concern is whether we can go back to Earth.
and he can repair the spaceship whenever it is broken.
>> And if he can repair the spaceship whenever it\'s broken.
And he will reflect the experience in to the scientific advancement.
>> I will also consider whether he will reflect the experience in to a scientific advancement.
finally we can enjoy the traveling with his description(explanation).
>> If so, finally, we can enjoy traveling with his explanation.
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