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2016-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

A little known knowledge is a dangerous thing.I agree with it. There is old proverb in korea,that is something (proper noun) could kill people. Its meaning is you could kill people,if you say somthing inaccurate. In my opinion, it depends on their personality. Someone just like to say"i guess it is..."without checking the truth. We all have to take resposibility for our actions. And especially,proportional experts such as doctors, teachers, professors and engineers, etc,have to take responsibility too.

강사 첨삭

Good Monday morning, Sylvia!

How are you today?

While you are writing your composition, make sure that

you are going to check the spelling of the words you are putting

since it can make your thoughts have different meaning

if you misspelled some of them.

See you later!

~~Teacher Erine~~

A little known knowledge is a dangerous thing.I agree with it.

>> Correct
 There is old proverb in korea,that is something (proper noun) could kill people.

>> There is an old proverb in Korea that says, \"Something could kill people.\".
 Its meaning is you could kill people,if you say somthing inaccurate.

>> Its meaning is you could kill people if you say something inaccurate.
 In my opinion, it depends on their personality.

>> Correct
 Someone just like to say\"i guess it is...\"without checking the truth.

>> Sometimes, people just like to say, \"I guess it is...\" without checking the truth.
 We all have to take resposibility for our actions.

>> We all have to take responsibility for our actions.
 And especially,proportional experts such as doctors, teachers, professors and engineers, etc,have to take responsibility too.

>> And especially, professionals such as doctors, teachers, professors and engineers, etc. have to take responsibility too.

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