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Here you are with your composition, Sylvia!^^

When you write, pay attention to your spacing, too.

Make your words separated by a space to make it

clearer for your reader.

Hope you will do it next time.

~~Teacher Erine~~

In my opinion,drivers and all passengers on the car have to wear their seat belts.

>> Correct
 Somepeople think that they are oppressed their freedom when they are forced to wear seat belts.

>> Some people think that their freedom is oppressed when they are forced to wear seat belts.
 I think it is really dangerouse idea.

>> I think it is really a dangerous idea.
 According to statistics, the death rate has increased because of people who haven`t fastened seat belts in a car accient.

>> According to statistics, the death rate has increased because of people who haven`t fastened their seat belts in a car accident.
 We have to maintain our security and protect our life with wearing seat belts.

>> We have to maintain our security and protect our lives by wearing seat belts.