homewark
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Sylvia.
Here you are with the corrections in your sentences.
If you have questions about the sentences,
feel free to ask me anytime.
Double check your spelling again.
Have a great day!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
When students move to a new school,They sometimes face problmes.
>> When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems.
In the early times students moved to a new school,they would be confused because they don`t have close friends and teachers.
>> In the early times, when students moved to a new school, they would be confused because they didn\'t have close friends and teachers.
And they don`t know many things how to handle.
>> And they didn`t know how to handle.many things
They are even treated as a outcast.
>> They were even treated as an outcast.
Therefor their parents and teachers should pay attention to the new students attentively.
>> Therefore, their parents and teachers should pay attention to the new students attentively.
They should give a counseling and advice for them as much as possible.
>> They should give counseling and advice to them as much as possible.
If i recommend one thing, It is a recruitment students volunteers to support and help them.
>> If I recommend one thing, it is to recruit student volunteers to support and help them.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.