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I think anyone can be a politician.They must do their work like making lows,reviewing national budget and watching the government etc.
Therefore,they must have some qualifications to becom a politician.they have to be honest and moral.First of all, devotion their lives for people`s happiness is most important.Politicians could come from all sorts of backgrounds. They also could run for the eletion as a candidate. But we have to correct choose whether who is the best.
It`s our duty to choose the best one.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sylvia!
Here are the corrections that I made
regarding your homework.
Please check the sentences and if you have
questions, feel free to ask me in class.
See you.
~~Teacher Erine~~
~~Teacher Erine~~
I think anyone can be a politician.
>> Correct
They must do their work like making lows,reviewing national budget and watching the government etc.
>> They must do their work like making laws, reviewing the national budget and watching the government etc.
Therefore,they must have some qualifications to becom a politician.
>> Therefore, they must have some qualifications to become a politician.
they have to be honest and moral.
>> Correct
First of all, devotion their lives for people`s happiness is most important.
>> First of all, devoting their lives for people`s happiness is the most important thing.
Politicians could come from all sorts of backgrounds.
>> Correct
They also could run for the eletion as a candidate.
>> They could also run for the election as a candidate.
But we have to correct choose whether who is the best.
>> But we have to choose correctly whether who is the best.
It`s our duty to choose the best one.
It`s our duty to choose the best one.
>> Correct
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