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강사 첨삭
Good morning, Sylvia!
Here are the corrections in your composition. Please be careful with your word usage. There are also some words that are accompanied by prepositions. As an example, you can see that I put \"about\" in the first sentence. Thank you so much. See you then.
~~Teacher Erine~~
I have heard these issue.
>> I have heard about this issue.
In my opinion, those enterprises should be shut down it of course.
>> In my opinion, those enterprises should be shut down.
those busines are not competent for students.
>> Those businesses are not competent for students.
Some students exchange their homework each other as well.
>> Some students exchange their homework with each other as well.
The most important thing is that they can`t feel awareness of problems that is immoral.
>> The most important thing is that they can\'t be aware that those are immoral.
For their future,they should do their best and widen their knowledge honestly.
>> Correct.
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