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2016-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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In my opinion, SAT or ACT exam is not accurate measure of students aptitude for college. It`s not legitimate to receive an evaluation in a single day, But there no way to receive with same condition and same standard,And receiving records from teachers can`t be equal. They are not objective. they could also receive unfair treatment and unfair academic records from teachers.I think the education administration should create a greate new methods that all students could get an evaluation equally.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Sylvia.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the exams

that students take in your country.

Please check the corrections I made and if you have

questions, feel free to open them up in class.

~~Teacher Erine~~

In my opinion, SAT or ACT exam is not accurate measure of students aptitude for college.

>> In my opinion, SAT or ACT exam is not an accurate measurement of the students\' aptitude for college.

It`s not legitimate to receive an evaluation in a single day, But there no way to receive with same condition and same standard,

>> It\'s not legitimate to receive an evaluation in a single day but there are no ways to receive the same condition and standard.

And receiving records from teachers can`t be equal.

>> Correct

They are not objective.

>> Correct

they could also receive unfair treatment and unfair academic records from teachers.

>> Correct

I think the education administration should create a greate new methods that all students could get an evaluation equally.

>> I think the education department should create a great new methods where all students could get an evaluation equally.

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