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Good morning, Sylvia.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the exams
that students take in your country.
Please check the corrections I made and if you have
questions, feel free to open them up in class.
~~Teacher Erine~~
In my opinion, SAT or ACT exam is not accurate measure of students aptitude for college.
>> In my opinion, SAT or ACT exam is not an accurate measurement of the students\' aptitude for college.
It`s not legitimate to receive an evaluation in a single day, But there no way to receive with same condition and same standard,
>> It\'s not legitimate to receive an evaluation in a single day but there are no ways to receive the same condition and standard.
And receiving records from teachers can`t be equal.
>> Correct
They are not objective.
>> Correct
they could also receive unfair treatment and unfair academic records from teachers.
>> Correct
I think the education administration should create a greate new methods that all students could get an evaluation equally.
>> I think the education department should create a great new methods where all students could get an evaluation equally.
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