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Hello there, Sylvia!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the topic.

Here are the corrections regarding your sentences.

I am enlightened also by your ideas and I want to thank

you for them.

See you again!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Live only today, and you ruin tomorrow.

I agree with \"live only for today\" but I don`t agree with\"you ruin tomorrow.

>> Correct

\"It`s depend on how to interpret the meaning.

>> It depends on how somebody interprets the meaning.

The past, present and future is a part of our lives.

>> The past, present and future are not part of our lives.

Many people have excessive dreams and excessive greed what they want to be and achieve.

>> Many people have excessive dreams and greed of what they want to achieve.

Therefor it make you feel anxiety and be anxious about the future.

>> Therefore, it gives you anxiety about the future.

It doesn`t mean that i deny the future.

>> It doesn\'t mean that I deny the future.

Of course future is unpredictable.

>> Correct

but we need to predict and design.

>> Correct

however we should not be worry too much about the future.

>> Correct

that is`nt happened yet.

>> It hasn\'t happened yet.

we have time for self reflection of the past.

>> We have time for self-reflection about the past.

we do our best in the present.

>> Correct

And finally, create bright future.

>> Correct