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Good morning, Sylvia!
Sharing your thoughts is very important for me.
Thank you so much for sharing all the time.
~~Teacher Erine~~
I agree with this dafinition of genius.
>> I agree with this definition of genius.
In my opinion, mormal people can`t compare with people who have natural gift. (in a same time and effort).
>> In my opinion, normal people can`t compare with people who have natural gift (in a same time and effort).
They could achieve their goals easily without too much persperation.
>> They could achieve their goals easily without too much perspiration.
But even though they have an advantage they do not all succeed, I think it means that effort and diligence is more important to attain the goal.
>> But even though they have an advantage, they do not all succeed. I think it means that effort and diligence are more important to attain the goal.
Brain have developed during entire life if you make an effort consistently.
>> Brain has developed during entire life if you make an effort consistently.
I think ninety-nine percent of perspiration is more important than natural ability.
>> Correct
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