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2016-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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There is a Korean traditional song. we cold it pansori. Fan means place which is crowded with audience and sori means song. It is an epic folk song with story.the singer sing a song to the accompaniment of drum only. They don`t use any other musical instruments. We cold the drumers"gosoo". The gosoo gives a rejoinder in the interval of song to add to the amusements like"eulsoo and Jota". The singers should reseive intensive training.And they produce the natural sounds like wind,wave and waterfall etc.The sounds of pansori are too sorrowful.general singers can`t make the sounds of fansori.The fansori is designated as a World Heritage sites.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Sylvia!
Here you are with your corrections. Please read

and you may have some questions so feel free to

ask me questions.

Have a great weekend.

~~Teacher Erine~~

There is a Korean traditional song. we cold it pansori.

>> There is a Korean traditional song named \"Pansori\".
Fan means place which is crowded with audience and sori means song.

>> Fan means a crowded place with audience and Sory means song.

It is an epic folk song with story.

>> Correct

the singer sing a song to the accompaniment of drum only.

>> The singer sings a song with the accompaniment of drums only.

They don`t use any other musical instruments.

>> Correct.

We cold the drumers\"gosoo\".

>> Correct

The gosoo gives a rejoinder in the interval of song to add to the amusements like\"eulsoo and Jota\".

>> Correct

The singers should reseive intensive training.

>> The singers should receive an intensive training.

And they produce the natural sounds like wind,wave and waterfall etc.

>> Correct

The sounds of pansori are too sorrowful.

>> Correct

general singers can`t make the sounds of fansori.

>> Correct

The fansori is designated as a World Heritage sites.

>> The fansori is designated as a World Heritage site.

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