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Good morning, Sylvia!
Here you are with your corrections. Please read
and you may have some questions so feel free to
ask me questions.
Have a great weekend.
~~Teacher Erine~~
There is a Korean traditional song. we cold it pansori.
>> There is a Korean traditional song named \"Pansori\".
Fan means place which is crowded with audience and sori means song.
>> Fan means a crowded place with audience and Sory means song.
It is an epic folk song with story.
>> Correct
the singer sing a song to the accompaniment of drum only.
>> The singer sings a song with the accompaniment of drums only.
They don`t use any other musical instruments.
>> Correct.
We cold the drumers\"gosoo\".
>> Correct
The gosoo gives a rejoinder in the interval of song to add to the amusements like\"eulsoo and Jota\".
>> Correct
The singers should reseive intensive training.
>> The singers should receive an intensive training.
And they produce the natural sounds like wind,wave and waterfall etc.
>> Correct
The sounds of pansori are too sorrowful.
>> Correct
general singers can`t make the sounds of fansori.
>> Correct
The fansori is designated as a World Heritage sites.
>> The fansori is designated as a World Heritage site.
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