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2017-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Hi teacher Chloe! I`m very happy to meet you, and thank you for your advices. I would like to improve my speaking english well, thereby I need your help.I think I`m not good at speaking english now but it will be better if you help me .Thank you.Have a great day. 1.Hardly any flights are leaving London this morning because of the snow. 2.I have some savings so I am going to treat myself to a nice holiday. 3."I ve just made some tea. Would you like a cup?" 4.(At the end of a presentation) "Are there any questions? 5.You can catch any train as they all go to the airport.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Miss. [Name]!

I am commending you for getting a perfect score.

Congratulations!

I am touched with your message so, you should not worry because I am going to help you.

Just be confident enough in speaking the English language.

I am going to see you in our class then again later.

~Teacher Chloe

Hi teacher Chloe!

>>Hi, teacher Chloe!
I`m very happy to meet you, and thank you for your advices.

>>I was very happy to meet you and thankful for your advice. 
I would like to improve my speaking english well, thereby I need your help.

>>I need your help because I want to improve my English speaking skills.

I think I`m not good at speaking english now but it will be better if you help me .

>>I think I am not good at speaking English but with your help, I think I can better it.

Thank you.Have a great day.
>>Thank you. Have a great day!
1.Hardly any flights are leaving London this morning because of the snow.
>>Correct!
2.I have some savings so I am going to treat myself to a nice holiday.
>>Correct! 
3.\"I ve just made some tea. Would you like a cup?\"
>>Correct! 
4.(At the end of a presentation) \"Are there any questions?
>>Correct! 
5.You can catch any train as they all go to the airport. 

>>Correct!  

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