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2017-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

1.He responded with shrugging his shoulders. 2.Were you on the phone a lot this afternoon? I tried calling you five times and always got a busy signal. 3.I`m tired of waiting for him i`m leaving. 4.No, I came here on foot.My bicycle had a flat tire and my car was out gas. 5.i`ll wait untill 5:00, but not one minute longer!

강사 첨삭

Hello, Miss. [Name]!

You should know that I enjoyed talking with you in our class earlier.

Anyway, I think we should need to study more about \"prepositions\".

Also, try to self study them when you have time.

Enjoy the rest of your evening!
~Teacher Chloe

1.He responded with shrugging his shoulders.
>>He responded by shrugging his shoulders.
2.Were you on the phone a lot this afternoon? I tried calling you five times and always got a busy signal.
>>Correct!
3.I`m tired of waiting for him i`m leaving.
>>Correct!
4.No, I came here on foot.My bicycle had a flat tire and my car was out
gas.
>>No, I came here by foot. My bicycle had a flat tire and my car was out of gas.
5.i`ll wait untill 5:00, but not one minute longer!

>>I\'ll wait until 5:00, but not one minute longer!

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