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Hello Ms. [Name]. Thank you for this. Being fluent in another language is definitely not easy. It requires a lot of time for practice and familiarity. Good luck!
- T. Beth
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Yes It`s an important thimg for me.
>>> Yes, it\'s an important thing for me.
Bcause I want to express correct sentances when I meet foreigners anywhrer.
>>> Because I want to express myself in correct sentences when I meet foreigners anywhere.
When I`m especially in a trouble during vacation,I could solve the problems as soon as possible, If I can speak english fluently.
>>> Especially when I`m in trouble during vacation, I could solve the problems as soon as possible if I can speak English fluently.
but leaning foreign language is not easy for me.
>>> But learning a foreign language is not easy for me.
>>> OR: However, learning a foreign language is not easy for me.
I thimk, the most important thing are studing english constantly and I also have chances to speak english with native speakers as much as possible.
>>> I think the most important things are studying English constantly and also having chances to speak English with native speakers as much as possible.
And I would like to express abaut ja-sa in this morning class.
>>> OR: And I wanted to talk about Jesa during the class this morning.
Ja-sa means a ceremony for our ansestors on the day that they passed away.
>>> OR: Jesa means a ceremony for our ansestors on the day that they passed away.
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