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Hello Sylvia. Thank you for this. This story has such a sad ending. He has done so much for the country, which is actually good to know. But how his story ended was just so sad.

- T. Beth

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I think president No Moohyon was the best president in my mind.

>>> CORRECT.

>>> OR: For me, former president No Moohyon was the best president so far.   
 He hadn`t a good background and he didn`t graduate a prestigious university.and he had worked as a human right lawyer and he became a politician.

>>>  He didn\'t have a good background and didn\'t graduate from a prestigious school. Moreover, he had worked as a human right lawyer before becoming a politician.

One day,he was coming up as a hearing star in the parliament.

>>>  One day, he was a rising star in the parliament.
 He became Korean 16th president. 

>>> He became Korea\'s 16th president. 

 I can`t describe well.how he had managed his administration during his term of president.

>>> I can`t describe well how he had managed his administration during his term of presidency.

>>> OR: I am not that familiar with how he managed his administration during his term as the president.  
 However, I found that he had made a lot of efforts to develop this country in many fields such as education, peace, economy and diplomacy etc.and he tryed to ease off regionalism as well as.

>>>  However, I found that he had made a lot of efforts to develop this country in many fields such as education, peace, economy, diplomacy and he tried to ease off regionalism as well.

However,unfortunatey,he was envolved his mamily members in corruption.

>>>  However, it was unfortunate that his family was involved in corruption
 eventually.he committed suicide by throwing himself from cliff.

>>> Eventually, he committed suicide by throwing himself from a cliff.