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2013-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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How do you keep yourself focused on your priorities during difficult times? If possible, I try not to conflict with something what I have to do. So I always check my schedule. Unevitably, if something happens what I have to manage simulatenously, I put the priority on something what I can only do. If someone can also do it, I'll ask for him(or her).

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Never give up! Take care!

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 T. Kelly

 

If possible, I try not to conflict with something what I have to do.
>> If possible, I will try avoid conflict with something that I have to do.

So I always check my schedule.
>>Correct !
Unevitably, if something happens what I have to manage simulatenously,

>> If something happened inevitably,I have to manage it simultaneously.

I put the priority on something what I can only do.
>> I make sure to prioritize something that  I can only do.

If someone can also do it, I\'ll ask for him(or her).

>> If someone can do it, I\'ll ask help.

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