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If possible, I try not to conflict with something what I have to do.
>> If possible, I will try avoid conflict with something that I have to do.
So I always check my schedule.
>>Correct !
Unevitably, if something happens what I have to manage simulatenously,
>> If something happened inevitably,I have to manage it simultaneously.
I put the priority on something what I can only do.
>> I make sure to prioritize something that I can only do.
If someone can also do it, I\'ll ask for him(or her).
>> If someone can do it, I\'ll ask help.
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