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2017-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Do you think students should wear uniforms? I think students shoudn't wear uniforms. Because some students can feel uncomfortable. And,other students hate this clothes disign. And the uniforms price is very expensive. When some students lost their uniforms,it is waste the money. So, I think students shouldn't wear uniforms.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, my dear [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing your opinion about school uniforms. Keep on expressing yourself!^^

~t. Kelly^^

Do you think students should wear uniforms?
I think students shoudn\'t wear uniforms.

>> I think, students should not wear uniforms.
Because some students can feel uncomfortable.

>> Correct.
And,other students hate this clothes disign.

>> And, other students hate the design of their uniform.
And the uniforms price is very expensive.

>> Correct.
When some students lost their uniforms,it is waste the money.
>> When some students lose their uniforms, it is a waste of money.
So, I think students shouldn\'t wear uniforms.

>> Correct.

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