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2018-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Do you think using mobile phones in public is dangerous? Why? Answer in no more than FIVE (sentences I think using mobile phone in public place is not dangerous. Because I didn't imange about usuing mobile phone in pulic is dangerous. And, there are all has WiFI in publics. So,I think it is not dangerous.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for completing your homework. I appreciate your strong opinion about the topic. Watch out for some corrections I made for you below. See you in our next class!
I think using mobile phone in public place is not dangerous.
>> I think that using a mobile phone in a public place is not dangerous.
Because I didn\'t imange about usuing mobile phone in pulic is dangerous.
>> Because I don\'t think that using a mobile phone in pulic is dangerous.
>> OR: I can\'t imagine how using a mobile phone in public could be unsafe.
And, there are all has WiFI in publics.
>> And, there is Wi-Fi in public places.
So,I think it is not dangerous.
>> CORRECT!
>> So, I think it is safe to use mobile phones in public.

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