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2015-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I prefer to study with a group of students. When I study with a group of students, I can get to help from a group of students and I can help a group of students. Also I can improve my grades as competition.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for asnwering your homework! ^^ I think I agree with your opinion. Actually you can learn new inforamtion from your group members, right? Also, it is enjoyable unlike studying alone. :) So, when you study, call your daughters and you study together. It\'s more fun^^ kk Take care and see you!^^   ~~Teacher Kris   I prefer to study with a group of students. >> CorrectWhen I study with a group of students, I can get to help from a group of students and I can help a group of students.>> When I study with a group of students, I can get help from them and I can help them as well. Also I can improve my grades as competition. >> Also, I can improve my grades and I can compete with the others.

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